There it was, lying in the sand, the glass glinting in the sun. As I pulled the bottle out of its resting place, and twisted the cork, a letter slipped out. It was old and worn, the writing barely visible, but I could just make out the message..it read “please forgive me….J x”
Luvit x
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Nice. You did it, one of t he few I’ve read that told a story within the confines of so few words.
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I love this. Message in a bottle, even if it isn’t for me, always makes me feel a romantic mood. 😀
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And the interpretation is left to the reader, as it should be. Well done.
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thank you, I was really unsure on this task
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Short and sweet – nicely done!
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What a ripper of a yarn in so few words. And, no, you are not meanie like me.. LOL.
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No I’m not mean, most of the time, I like to think you are not either! There seems to be a mischievous side to you!
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Oh, now this is so good. I immediately felt myself there. Such a bit of perfection.
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thank you so much for your kind words
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You’re welcome.
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