“We are going round in circles! Somebody is not rowing properly”
“Its not me, I am doing it like you taught me”
“Well, you must be doing something wrong!”
No matter how hard they tried, the boat continued to move in circular movements, creating more and more frustration between the people in the boat. This was supposed to be a fun day out, but certain members of the group were so focused on doing things right, the fun had been taken out of the activity, and everyone was feeling annoyed. Everyone that is, except the little girl at the stern, who was quietly day dreaming, her oar in the water, unknowingly steering the boat round and round.
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Written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring writers
Photo from Ady, author of the blog The Bourne of Infinitude
Hahaha!!! Great!
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thanks, glad you enjoyed it
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Lovely! Hooray for the little girl who’s having fun despite all the fuss 🙂
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That was great!
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I did enjoy the unknowing bit at the end Mary, well done.
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Very cute story! I really loved the ending. LOL! Welcome to FFfAW! We are happy you are participating and hope you will continue coming back. 🙂
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Nice story, could almost imagine myself in between spoilers lol..
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Cute little dreamer.
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Funny and cute
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So funny, loved it :-).
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Very amusing. I could just picture them going around and around! Great story for this prompt.
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Ha! What a way to end it. This piece is a great token to life. Something most can relate to. Excellent!
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Really nice!
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thanks
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Lovely finish, reminds me of the dreamy minds of youth ~ A loovely response to the prompt.
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thank you John, this was a real event, and the girl in he back was my daughter!! Made me giggle at the time, and whenever I think about it since
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I guessed there was a personal angle ~ Well done 🙂
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Sometimes it is best to be in a day dream. An amusing story!
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absolutely!Thanks
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This is wonderful and funny and innocent. It had me thinking of Alice in Wonderland.
Ellespeth
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A sweet story. I love the thought of the little girl steering them in circles whilst they all bicker. 🙂
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What a cute and amusing story 🙂
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thanks
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This is so cute. Love how the little girl is having a nice time daydreaming and doesn’t realise what is going on around her!
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